Dear, Future Me


      Something tragic has happened. This event changed my feelings towards life. It makes me sad to think about it. When I think about it, it makes just feel different. This event changed my life for one main reason.
       
        This tragedy affected my feelings towards my life because he was close to my age, and knowing that anything can happen at any age is very scary to me. What happened was my 16 year old cousin was killed. This affected me deeply because not only was he family but he was so young and close to my age and the person that killed him didn't even know who he was. A lot of people say he was at the wrong place at the wrong time but I question myself about that because how do you know when you're at the wrong place at the wrong time when time is everything. It sometimes frighten me to know things like that can happen and here's  why.

         Before any of this happened me and him were really close. We acted just the same, and his little brother and my older sister were just the same so we had more in common. However during a few weeks before he was killed I somehow started feeling awkward around him so we fell off. I really started to separate myself from him, when I would go over his I would avoid him, and when he would come over my house I would stay in my room. So now after he passed I really regret treating him like that, so that's why this type of stuff frightens me.

         Here's what happened that night. He was just coming back from prom shopping with his little brother, older sister, his niece, and his mother. When he got home his mom went to work, and he went outside with his friend. I really wish he didn't do that because when he went outside he was shot and killed. The news spread pretty quick and when I found out I knew my life had changed.

         Now I said how this changed my life because it showed me that life is really unexpecting but also this made made me a better person. It made except people for who they are because who knows what they go through. Also to not hold grudges against people to just forgive and forget. Most importantly love your family and friends while there're here. So this is how my life has been affected by this tragic event. 


                                                                         Sincerely,
                                                                              The old you 
       

My Most Important Decision

The most important decision I had to  make was when I had to choose witch cheer group to be in.. KLM Elite Or Xquisite Allstars.

I was with KLM. Elite But when It started coasting too much, my mom was considering me going to another team. At first I tried out for a couple of teams. those teams were twisters, Crimson Heat and Xquisite Allstars .

Twisters were really Good, But it was not for me. Heat was a good team also, but I dident think I belonged there. And I loved Xquisite. They made me feel at home. Most of the people were older than me, but I could really relate to them. KLM said that we can do fundraising so we can afford it. Sa that means that I have a choice.

I live KLM and everyone in it but is it time for a change? I have been there ever since I was 6 years old and I'm 13 now. Xquisite was really good but I'll miss KLM. I know I'll make good friends at Xquisite but I know I'll miss them

I choose Xquisite and as Much as I'll miss KLM, it was time for a change, and I'm very happy at Xquisite.

Jonaya Mack story

Dear future me.Wow!I had a dream about getting a singing contract. I am very excited  because it is going to be a possible dream one day if I kept singing good. Do I  have the voice to make it true? I was in my room sleep taking a nap and then I seen myself on stage.I just know that it will come to pass.         


      Singing is not a gift everybody have only certain people have this talent.For example,Jessica simspon can sing & Steve  Harvey  can not sing but he is a big icon and is more know then Jessica. Then if you can sing you should keep practicing  to get better and to be perfect. Next, I love to sing &i do my best but I know people who can sing better than me & are my age but they don't practice. Finally, athoner  example is  that China Anne Mcllian can sing and use her gift but Adele can but when she got into a new deeper relationship then she stop singing.


 I had 50,000 votes every week on American Idol. Then, I called my mom& told her I might win & she  said she knew it to. Next, I was crying because I remember people were doubting me & I reach my dream job. Finally, I was on the new & people was downloading my soundtracks on there phones &  were  looking at me on YouTube. Next,I got  a call from my manger that he wanted me to fly out to LA fast. Then I arrived in LA & people were screaming my name & I had gifts when I arrived at the airport.Later I found my manger & me and him talk about when my first concert will start.Finally 6 months pass & I was at my concert backstage.


I was at my concert & I got a call that my brother got shoot on the way home from a weeding& was losing a lot of blood. I run off stage & began to cry. I wanted to retire if my brother died but he made it and was in rehab for a while.




THE END

                Dear, future Tatty

                       My feelings towards my bestfriend changed because of a terrible dream. My bestfriend brother rashard suddenly became the world to me. I told him everything I know cause we was close . He was my everything plus MORE. But I just realized it was more then that.

                       In my dream what had happened was , I was at the playground with raven and rashard . It was funny how I was close to both of them and they both knew everything about me. Anyways in my dream I was rashard girlfriend...... it was awkward because he is like a brother/bestfriend . I never really thought of going with him. Anyways, we was all talking , joaning, and having a good time. I was playing on his phone and some girl name Chanel texted him "hey baby :)". So since he was my boyfriend , I was HIGHLY upset.

                     

                       I said " who is this?". He said "nobody". So since obviously it's somebody I decided to give him his phone back and go home . He tried to catch up with me and tell me the truth but I kept walking . As I was crossing the street he was crossing the street to behind . All of a sudden..... BOOMM! I turned around so fast, too see that he got hit by a car. Memories started flashing back. I screamed " Nooooo! ". As he lay on the street raven comes and holds him while she calls the police. I blacked out and started fighting the lady that was in the car. *shruggs*.  

                     Me and raven was crying so much , I couldn't breathe or think straight. So you know how dreams are like movies?, so a few days later I went to go see him in the hospital . I was sad, crying, upset at my self , I was just ughhhh . I never cried like this since my cousin died. Then I woke up.

                    That whole morning I was in bed thinking about how much he matters to me . And GOOD he looks ;) . It was a new awakening to a whole new feeling. Since then everytime I see him , I like him more and more . Cause he look good , so yeah he started noticing  I was attracted to him. So since then ......... TO BE CONTINUED

                                                                              Sincerley,

                                                                                             Tatty :) 

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